This is my final draft for my magazine mock up...
There are things i don't like about it but i will talk about these in my evaluation of the cover i have made where I'll also mention what i want to add to it.
You have 5 weeks to complete all of your pages, this means that you have a significant amount of work to do. I concur with your evaluation that it is not good and there are many many issues. I expect to see you on Wednesday after school, for as long as it takes to get this work up to standard. This is not good enough and when you are there on Wednesday I expect to see you with a magazine in this genre next to you so that you can identify exactly what you need to be doing.
You have 5 weeks to complete all of your pages, this means that you have a significant amount of work to do. I concur with your evaluation that it is not good and there are many many issues. I expect to see you on Wednesday after school, for as long as it takes to get this work up to standard. This is not good enough and when you are there on Wednesday I expect to see you with a magazine in this genre next to you so that you can identify exactly what you need to be doing.
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