Magazine Mock Up Evaluation

After creating my magazine mock up there were still a few things that annoyed me about it or things i just didn't add or do how i feel i should have....

Things i will change for my final version are:

• I'd create an actual logo not just some text saying "Flocker" to make the cover look better and more "professional"

• Have something going on in the background to make it look better but i couldn't think of anything while i was making it that would be good i did get a few ideas after i finished it though such as destroying musical stuff like an amp or something like that.
• Not have it as text heavy, i want to make the text just look better to the eye as i think it looks way too text heavy as it is now so i will change this.
• Try find a better font and a better font size to use as i didn't like what i used in my mock up.
• Make it look more like a rock magazine in general or more like an actual Kerrang magazine.
• Try make it look more professional
• Try to settle on a house style with the colours 
• Add in more pictures in the corner or something
• Make the cover look better

Iv tried to not rant about how much i hate the mock up i created but ill make sure my final version is better in the ways listed above as well as any other improvements i think of between now and then.

Magazine Mock up Complete

This is my final draft for my magazine mock up...
There are things i don't like about it but i will talk about these in my evaluation of the cover i have made where I'll also mention what i want to add to it.

Magazine Mock Up Progress 3

This is my near finished cover for the mock up iv done so far but there are still things i don't like and want to continue to add more into it.

Magazine Mock Up progress 2

This is my cover after adding some text and messing around more with some options still got things to change and add in more text as well.

Mock Up Basic Progress

This is just the very basic progress of my mock up so far and i'm still just messing around with different options and learning how to use photoshop.